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Never Forgetting [Change] Print E-mail
Poetry
Written by JayTee   
Sunday, 20 April 2008
Laying on the soft, green grass
Staring at the sky
How big it is
With every star seeming to be in its place
Twinkling down at the world underneath

Interlace my fingers with yours
As a breeze blows across the field we’re in
You shiver a bit and move closer
A smile comes upon my face, knowing you’re there with me
I wouldn’t want it any other way

But now you’re gone, there’s no one by my side
The sky gets cloudy
It begins to rain
I lay there, alone, shivering in the cold
It’s what I truly deserve

You’re off on your own now
It’s what you needed
You’ll find someone better for you
Healthier for you
I’ll lay here in the wet grass
Wondering what I could do

Now it begins to snow
Yet I still don’t dare move
You’ve become successful while I’ve fallen behind
There’s no point anymore
Buried I become

My bodies frozen now
Just like my heart was before
I’m sorry I couldn’t have treated you better
I’m sorry I was so self centered
Realization sweeps across my thoughts
I unbury myself and stand up, more alive
Working to change, I make my way out of the field
Back to the real world

You were the motivation I needed
I still love you, and wish you well on your journey
As for me, I’ll be working on changing for the better
Never forgetting the moments we spent together
 
Love Print E-mail
Poetry
Written by Princess   
Sunday, 13 April 2008

 

irrational thoughts,

running all though my mind.

all thats left now,

Is thoughts of suicide.

How could you do this?

It hurts so much.

I dont know what to do,

I just miss your touch!

Although i tried so hard,

I gues it not eough.

Its hard to let go...

But who siad life wasn't tough!

I want to be with you,

and become your only love.

Your heart is so pure,

Like a beautiful white dove!

No matter what happens

i want you to know...

that nothing has changed,

and i still love you so!

 

By Princess!

 

 

 

 
Love Print E-mail
Poetry
Written by Princess   
Sunday, 13 April 2008

 

irrational thoughts,

running all though my mind.

all thats left now,

Is thoughts of suicide.

How could you do this?

It hurts so much.

I dont know what to do,

I just miss your touch!

Although i tried so hard,

I gues it not eough.

Its hard to let go...

But who siad life wasn't tough!

I want to be with you,

and become your only love.

Your heart is so pure,

Like a beautiful white dove!

No matter what happens

i want you to know...

that nothing has changed,

and i still love you so!

 

By Princess!

 

 

 

 
How much older is...okay? Print E-mail
Ask Alice!
Written by Jordan   
Friday, 28 March 2008

I am 16. The love of my life is 23. Help! We have been "together" without being "dating" for 2 years. I feel a really strong emotional connection with her that I just can't feel with anyone else. We are not having sex, and do not plan to put the "dating" title to our relationship until I am 17, of legal age. The family seemed to like her a lot, until they found out the way I feel about her, then my mom promptly tried to throw her in jail for child molestation. Obviously, no evidence was found, and the case was null and void. Normally, I would never go for someone so much older than me, but the moment I saw her, I just knew I couldn't continue on without her in my life, and fate has dealt us some very favorable hands. When we first met, I was with someone, and she was engaged to be married. A year later (though my thoughts of her hadn't subsided, we didn't get phone numbers or anything and had not talked at all) I ran into her again. As it happened, we had both ridden ourselves of relationships and realized the wonderful thing that could lie ahead. Society has been very rude to her about the situation, to say the least, and my mom still does not let me see her. (I do anyway, but keeping up the secrecy has gotten tedious.) In 4 months, I can legally move out with her, and no one can tell us anything, but the issue lies with my family. My mom has gotten psychotic over the years, abused drugs and alcohol, and literally told me I was the devil. But I still love her. She is my mother, after all. I don't know how she will react to this. And my love has told me she wants nothing to do with my family when we are together. I can understand why, but it's still not what I want. And my mom tells me I can be with/talk to anyone I want when I turn 17, if I am still living with her, but I never know what's going to happen to that decision, due to the drugs. I know 4 months will go by rather quickly, and I have no idea what I sould do. ANY advice from ANYONE would be very helpful.

 

As much as I do agree with the saying "Age is nothing but a number," you have to draw the line somewhere while you are still a minor. 

I know you understand the concept of the law, as you have stated. Your mother is not thinking clearly. Her thought process is being fogged with this substance abuse.

In four months, you will be able to make your own choices. The age difference is okay. It really is. While we're this young, it seems a lot, but one day it won't. Don't forget that. Talk to your love. Talk to her about your family and how you feel about them etc. If she really loves you, she might make the occasional exception. And if your family loves you, they will understand how she makes you feel. 

Talking always helps. But be smart when you discuss these things, don't become irrational. The things your mother says aren't coming from your mother, remember that. You have time still. Don't get so caught up in relationships. Stay with her, yes. But live the life you have now, and when the time comes, act.

Write if you need more. Good luck.

 

-Alice


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It Isn't Really Poetry. But Pretty Good Nonetheless. "Cat and Mouse:A Story" Print E-mail
Poetry
Written by Jordan Wade   
Friday, 28 March 2008

She sees her prey from beneath her eyelashes. She can't help

but grin at the thought of being able to play her little game again.

She picks herself out of the chair and tactfully sneaks towards the

door. She knows he is watching her, but she doesn't turn around. It's

only a game, after all. The curves of her body are enticing to him, as

they have been to so many others. It's as if they have learned the

rules of the game and are as eager to play as she is. She slips around

the corner and out of sight, knowing very well that she will be pursued.

His breath can be heard from around the corner and he is excited by

her long, blonde hair sweeping around the corners, and her giggles

echoing the vacant hallways. He is the hunter, but she knows

she is in control. She slows down ever so slightly, allowing him to catch

up. When she hears his footsteps growing nearer, she swiftly heads to her

destination. She approaches a room with a scarlet bedspread and curtains.

The room is dimly lit with half-open blinds, and music is soflty playing. He

enters the room a few moments later, exhaustion creeping across his face.

She smiles, her lips perfectly covered with shiny gloss, and slowly

makes her way over to him. The swing of her hips hold his gaze as she

wraps one small arm around her toy for the day, letting perfectly manicured

fingers get tangled in his thick brown hair. She places a soft kiss on his

lips, caressing his face as he closes his eyes. She loves the effect she

has on him. His hands are still and unmoving on her back, unsure about

what's going to happen, not daring to cross any boundaries, but hers are

ready to explore as she trails playful kisses along his neck. His face is even

with hers, the scent of strawberry lipgloss and flowery perfume fills his

senses, overwhelming him when he feels the pressure of her lips

against his. He enjoyed the chase, but he is more than happy to let her

take over. He lies on the bed and feels her lie down next to him, but she

knows better than to let things get too deep. She sees him lying there,

a sense of longing in his eyes, and for a moment, she remembers how

she used to be. How she used to trust...to love. But

she mustn't let her guard down. She knows all too well how easy it would

be for him to hurt her. She refuses to let her heart be broken again.

Her hands reach out for his and she lifts him off of the bed.

"I love you." he says.

She smiles. "I love you, too."

 

She really does enjoy her little games.

 

 

 

Jordan A. Wade

 
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