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TOPIC: Poetry
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Tiff (User)
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Poetry 2007/05/11 17:24
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hey i wrote this poem and i wanted to kno what yall think about it
Waiting
I've been here waiting, waiting for you to make up your mind. Through all this time I've always been here waiting, waiting for your love, which never comes. We got so close then it all fell apart, what happend? what about everything you said did you really mean it? I'm so confused I don't kno what i should believe, after all this time what do i do without you. I wanted you and noone else and now after all this time what do i mean to you? After waiting so long I got nothin to show for it except a broken heart. By:Tiffany Slean
hey if ya'll want ya'll can post your own poem and see what other people think about it.
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